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I will wait for Mike to do his changes.
[2022-05-28 13:23:21]
[Eddie Holmes]
I've been over it a few times and have gotten it to the right length and it read well. Then someone else has a go and
it stuff gets added again. Someone needs to say enough.
[2022-05-28 13:25:10]
[Eddie Holmes]
Joel took control of the other paper which was fine apart from the blatant mis-positing of commas.
[2022-05-28 13:48:49]
[Robert Garry]
Been there too - the stuff that gets added usually has been said somewhere else and said better. Or, it's
unnecessary. Maybe @Kristian Andersen can put a lock on...
[2022-05-28 14:05:49]
[Kristian Andersen]
It's in Mike's hands right now because stuff still had to be added in response to new analyses and the reviewers.
Once he's done I'll go in and :scissors: - I'm not worried about length
[2022-05-28 14:13:46]
[Eddie Holmes]
Trying to anticipate what Caroline wants is not the way to write the paper. Stick to what the science says.
[2022-05-28 14:17:07]
[Kristian Andersen]
Agreed. Although she was _very_ specific about a few things we had to include, including the possibility of reverse
zoonosis.
[2022-05-28 14:41:10]
[Robert Garry]
Just need to land this plane...getting there.
[2022-05-29 10:33:41]
[Robert Garry]
Under 4000 words - don't tell anyone....
[2022-05-29 11:12:52]
[Andrew Rambaut]
Yeah - been quietly cutting redundant words out here and there.
[2022-05-29 11:20:32]
[Robert Garry]
Excellent work @Andrew Rambaut Heroic actually! :male_superhero:
[2022-05-29 11:21:59]
[Robert Garry]
I'm pretty sure that the Science editors will remove a lot of colons, semi-colons and conjunctions...
[2022-05-31 11:53:29]
[Andrew Rambaut]
Yeah right, sure [shared file(s): Image from iOS.jpg]
[2022-05-31 11:55:50]
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