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great job on the R2R @Kristian Andersen
[2022-05-28 05:20:50]
[Andrew Rambaut]
I agree that we don't need the summary. The paper is already concise enough.
[2022-05-28 05:23:21]
[Robert Garry]
Yeah - plus cutting "in sum" would have the virtue of getting closer to the 4000 word guidance.
[2022-05-28 05:46:33]
[Andrew Rambaut]
I did a lot of trimming a while back to get us to 3750 words so we had a bit of space for additional stuff. But we are
back up to 4335. Removing the In sum paragraph would get us to about 4135 so we should definitely remove it. I will
see if I can get a few more trims to take us down to 4000
[2022-05-28 06:31:57]
[Kristian Andersen]
I'll get on the paper once Mike's done with his passes. Yes, needs editing for clarity.
[2022-05-28 07:42:31]
[Andrew Rambaut]
I just told him off for adding more stuff. He tends to do that.
[2022-05-28 07:46:32]
[Kristian Andersen]
I noticed... :wink:
[2022-05-28 07:54:26]
[Andrew Rambaut]
He just wants to preempt criticism which is fine but you have to draw the line (or at least put it in supplementary and
tell the reader to go there).
[2022-05-28 07:57:58]
[Robert Garry]
I makes no sense snatching defeat out of the arms of victory by needlessly bucking the editor.
[2022-05-28 07:58:14]
[Kristian Andersen]
Yeah, and we have to be very careful that we cater to the scientific community and not to Twitter
[2022-05-28 07:59:05]
[Andrew Rambaut]
There seems to be an issue with Paperpile because this is a word document. You ok if I convert it to a GoogleDoc?
[2022-05-28 07:59:48]
[Kristian Andersen]
Okay with me - and yes, going to Word and then back to Google is a problem... Bob, I'm looking at you :wink:
[2022-05-28 08:05:06]
[Robert Garry]
:disguised_face:
[2022-05-28 08:06:24]
[Andrew Rambaut]
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