Private channel session 1781

7 messages over 2h 12m, 2022-05-28 – 2022-05-28.

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1. 2022-05-28 04:19 Robert F. Garry open PDF p.1115
   Shocking, but true.
2. 2022-05-28 05:19 Robert F. Garry open PDF p.1115
   @Kristian Andersen et al - you might want to go over Worobey2022 one mo' time. It's very much getting there, but still I think the writing could be a bit crisper and punchier - too many words and complex sentences in a few cases. The "In sum" paragraph is [still] redundant IMO.
3. 2022-05-28 05:20 Robert F. Garry open PDF p.1115
   great job on the R2R @Kristian Andersen
4. 2022-05-28 05:20 Andrew Rambaut open PDF p.1116
   I agree that we don't need the summary. The paper is already concise enough.
5. 2022-05-28 05:23 Robert F. Garry open PDF p.1116
   Yeah - plus cutting "in sum" would have the virtue of getting closer to the 4000 word guidance.
6. 2022-05-28 05:46 Andrew Rambaut open PDF p.1116
   I did a lot of trimming a while back to get us to 3750 words so we had a bit of space for additional stuff. But we are back up to 4335. Removing the In sum paragraph would get us to about 4135 so we should definitely remove it. I will see if I can get a few more trims to take us down to 4000
7. 2022-05-28 06:31 Kristian G. Andersen open PDF p.1116
   I'll get on the paper once Mike's done with his passes. Yes, needs editing for clarity.