Private channel session 1461

5 messages over 17m, 2021-05-31 – 2021-05-31.

A “conversation” here is an activity session — a run of messages with under 60 minutes of silence inside it. The channel had no native conversation boundaries.

1. 2021-05-31 17:59 Edward C. Holmes open PDF p.901
   I think might have to give up with that Nature doc. Every time I cut it down, it just expands in size again. I've not got the energy or the time to keep doing this.
2. 2021-05-31 18:01 Kristian G. Andersen open PDF p.901
   No problem - let me go in tomorrow evening and cut. Did Andrew get a chance to take a look? I liked his outline...
3. 2021-05-31 18:09 Edward C. Holmes open PDF p.901
   Thanks. It's driving me crazy.
4. 2021-05-31 18:13 Robert F. Garry open PDF p.901
   Indeed - run-on sentences and overly long paragraphs. Main concern has to be readability...
5. 2021-05-31 18:17 Edward C. Holmes open PDF p.901
   It has to be bang, bang, bang....not bang, clause, subclause, cross-reference, bang